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Does my paragraph clearly state the idea?

dweins

Germany

Hello,
Please consider my paragraph below:
” In heaven, we will love each and every heavenly human completely to our maximum capacity for love ….... God, however, will always be the principal object of our love in heaven since the reason why we love each of our heavenly neighbours will be precisely because we love God in the first place.”
Does my paragraph above clearly state the idea that in heaven, our heavenly love for God will be the reason for our heavenly love for each of the heavenly humans?
(I am not trying to discuss religion here, I am only asking if my paragraph is clearly stating the idea)
Thank you,

02:07 AM Jun 19 2016 |

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ShirleyFWilliam

United States

I have got the idea you are trying to convey. Nice write up.


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07:08 AM Sep 08 2016 |