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Youth

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February 5, 2010


When I was 4 Yrs Old : My father is THE  BEST


When I was 6 Yrs Old : My father seems to know everyone

when I was 10 Yrs Old : My father is excellent but he is
short tempered

When I was 12 Yrs Old : My father was nice when I was
little

When I was 14 Yrs Old : My father started being too
sensitive

When I was 16 Yrs Old : My father can ' t keep up with
modern time

When I was 18 Yrs Old : My father is getting less tolerant
as the days pass by


When I was 20 Yrs Old : It is too hard to forgive my
father, how could my Mum stand him all these years


When I was 25 Yrs Old : My father seems to be objecting to
everything I do 

When I was 30 Yrs Old: It ' s very difficult to be in
agreement with my father, I wonder if my Grandfather was
troubled by my father when he was a youth
 

When I was 40 Yrs Old: My father brought me up with a lot
of discipline, I must do the same


When I was 45 Yrs Old: I am puzzled, how did my father
manage to raise all of us

 When I was 50 Yrs Old : It ' s rather difficult to
control my kids, how much did my father suffer for the sake
of upbringing and protecting us

 When I was 55 Yrs Old: My father was far looking and had
wide plans for us, he was gentle and outstanding.


When I became 60 Yrs Old: My father is THE BEST

  

Note that it took 56 Yrs to complete the cycle and return
to the starting point 'My father is THE BEST' ! Smile
So, Let ' s be good to our parents before it ' s too late and pray to Allaah that our own children will treat us even better than the way we treated our parents . 

06:46 AM Feb 07 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

Thanks Omar for dropping in

02:57 PM Feb 06 2010

OMAR911

OMAR911
Saudi Arabia

01:34 PM Feb 06 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To master of puppets:

Embarassed thanx for your nice words

01:30 PM Feb 06 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To Rose:

May Allah keep your mother in a very good health and gift her with long life.

thanks honey for visiting my blog. I really appreciate it.

11:13 AM Feb 06 2010

master_of puppets
Georgia

wow great, wonderful girl you are

09:54 AM Feb 06 2010

))~~#~~RO$E~~%~~((
Saudi Arabia

Yeah really this is very wonderful~ur words did touch my heart!!! I miss my Dad but he will remain in my heart 4ever,and thanx God cuz I have an amazing Mum may Allah help me 2 treat her the best as much as I can~ Thanx dear 4 such a great post and may Allah bless u:)

03:22 AM Feb 06 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To Amar:

your comments have become imperetive to me. They always support the whole blog as if they were part of it.

There are no suitable words to express how thankful I am for you.

03:12 AM Feb 06 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To Sbi:

thanx for your nice words, and thanx for being in my blog.

03:07 AM Feb 06 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To Dancin:

I'm sorry to know that. But still you can pray for him to keep him happy in his grave. This is the secret in the relationship between us and our parents, it never ends.

thanx dear for your rosy comment.

10:11 PM Feb 05 2010

Amar pandey
India

What a blog! thanks a lots for this. Because your blog has brought back my childhood memories. It si evident that how much deliberation it would have taken to write this. It  contains whole life's relation of a father to his son. unfortuneltly these days most of the parants are not adored and obeyed by their children dispite the fact they know that one day or other they will be father/mother too. It is really matter of concern. 

Threre could be a lot of differences between our parents and us. If we think about differences, it will only broaden the gap. Being prudent we should look the brightest things, that is commen and where we are similar. it will make our relationship more sweet and it will also lessen the bitterness.

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February 2, 2010

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Hi again Smile. This is the first poem I ever wrote. It might not be a POEM, but it was a trying after all.

I welcome any suggestion Innocent

When the sky opens its eye,
There are no clouds that fly.
Nor dark nor baby cry
But a space is between us, I sigh.

I still remember that land
WHere you did touch my hand.
THen stopped to give sound,
That love did start from underground.

I want to break the gray
And to begin then a new day
When the brave beats stop to say
I will love you for every day.

I have a crush only on you
I hope you feel the same way I do.

'cause everywhere to me
When I close my eyes and see
Your soul feeds mine and tells me
We will meet again under the tree.

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Hope you like it, and hope to read your comments on my new entry Embarassed

02:44 AM Feb 05 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

Your rosy words embarassed me Embarassed

thanx for being here, honey (:

04:46 PM Feb 04 2010

))~~#~~RO$E~~%~~((
Saudi Arabia

Really,is this ur first attempt??w000w very nice poetic words!!! no dear this is a poem and a very nice one as well~ keep going,we r waiting 4 more:)

04:19 AM Feb 04 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

you have no idea what your words have done to me.

I've never recieved such  supporting ever .

thanx for every thing. Embarassed

11:25 PM Feb 03 2010

Amar pandey
India

As beginner,  you did really very well. As far as I know about poetry, It is artistic way to present emotions and feelings. I can say that you have succeeded to do that. Well done. keep it up.   

11:20 AM Feb 03 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To handwriter:

I can't express how I feel toward your comment.

I really appreciate it. thanx for pushing me forward. Smile

11:12 AM Feb 03 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To East-Bird:

thanx for droping in. Smile

I never thought that you guys would like it.

That feeling is awsome. thanks again.

11:08 AM Feb 03 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To Chabowbo:

its a good idea. I know a friend who has achieved the native-speaker competence from listening to songs.

thanx, dear for being in my blog.

11:03 AM Feb 03 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To Omar911:

thanx for supporting me Smile

I expected you to be the first one to comment on my poem, and you didn't let me down.

thanx again

07:13 PM Feb 02 2010

handwriter

handwriter
Norway

Yes, very nice and very poetic.  Good job.  It all has good timing, rhythm and makes sense.  Yes, very good.  I hope that you will grace with more.

 

Take care,

doni

07:10 PM Feb 02 2010

East-Bird

East-Bird
Saudi Arabia

wow!

As a first attempt. It's more than awesome. I even thought it's not ur first one.Well done and keep going on.

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January 24, 2010

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Happiness is a kind of feeling that everyone strives to attain. Many have died searching for happiness. and many are still looking for it. but have some people found it?.

In my opinion, happiness is not a goal or something you can gain after work like money !!. no, happiness is something spiritual, something you feel it in your core. Happiness lies in the truth, it is not at the end of a journey. Its the journey itself.

You can choose how to live. you can make your own life happy or sad. It is you, and only you who can create such a journey and decorate it with happy moments and memories.

Be satsified with yourself, forgive yourself, be proud of yourself, and then BE HAPPY.

This is my first entry, I hope you like it. and I want to share it with everyone. so, I want you to tell me where do you think happiness lies?? Embarassed

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10:23 AM Jan 29 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

mmmmmm Yea thats a kind of happiness Smile

thanks for your comment ..

07:54 PM Jan 28 2010

Ryo94t

Ryo94t
Saudi Arabia

happy is to enjoing

06:40 AM Jan 27 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To my-high-IQ:

and I loved your dropping in.

thanx for visiting my blog. Embarassed

06:38 AM Jan 27 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

To Eleniya:

no you are not. Actually, you're a good-hearted person to wish happiness for everyone. God bless you. Smile

01:52 PM Jan 26 2010

my_high_IQ

my_high_IQ
Azerbaijan

 Happiness is not at the end of a journey. Its the journey itself.

loved these words!!

 

11:53 AM Jan 26 2010

Eleniya

Eleniya
Russian Federation

may be I'm crazy in my wishes, but I wish everyone would be happy!!!

03:16 AM Jan 26 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

Thanx for visiting my humble blog Smile

12:37 PM Jan 25 2010

OMAR911

OMAR911
Saudi Arabia

i agree with u

05:41 AM Jan 25 2010

Youth

Youth
Saudi Arabia

 

thanx for dropping in, honey Innocent

 

05:08 PM Jan 24 2010

dancin4108

dancin4108
United States

This is so very true. You've put this very well.

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