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Mumble and Jumble for soul !

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Saladeen

Saladeen

Pakistan

April 28, 2012

Morning - 

Breaking Dawn

Like sun in a bag

Brewing morning cup

Slowly and gently; 

Releasing Bright golden brisk, 

smoke of aroma, and

Orange pekoe taste -

To water of night, and to milk of day

Let's take together - 

a cup of morning

Brewing each cup for every chore

To fresh up everything to its core;

Brewing cup of:

Prayer,

Work,

Dream,

Hope,

Relationship, and

Friendship

Cup of love and vigor

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01:44 AM Apr 30 2012

Saladeen

Saladeen
Pakistan

Yulia, well said, Night is bowl of wine and mysterious river ... mysterious river of blackish locks that keeps you in rest to enjoy wonderland.

Glad to know that morning cup gives you pleasure!

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Irene, your improvisation is more poetic - love, cove, smell, dell ... what a nice add, thank-you!

03:37 AM Apr 29 2012

Irene Forever
Ukraine

What a miraculous poem! Thank you, dear Saladeen.

Here is my improvisation.:)

A cup of morning with a cup of love,

A cup of friedship to sweeten the day of a cove.

No need to drink it, you can just  smell.

A cup of morning in a peaceful dell.

Irene ♥

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11:26 PM Apr 28 2012

Agnolia

Agnolia
Russian Federation

That  is a  big pleasure to read your fresh poem!

Morining -cup of love and vigour

 Night is a bowl of wine and flowing mysterious river.

08:29 PM Apr 28 2012

Irene Forever
Ukraine

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06:17 AM Apr 28 2012

Mahtab.bp

Mahtab.bp
Iran, Islamic Republic Of

WOW!

Soooo beautiful!

Full of emotion and meaning!:)

05:24 AM Apr 28 2012

Saladeen

Saladeen
Pakistan

Tamador, I'm glad that you like it!

03:55 AM Apr 28 2012

Talk Now

Talk Now
Jordan

Hello Dear Saladeen ,

i like this cup of morning , it's taste orange pokea , and it's smell like aroma , great and wonderful, Let’s take together - a cup of morning .

thanks for sharing such a optimism poem Smile