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my first poem

May 17, 2010

冷落清秋，
时间地点依旧
光影杯环，
恍觉可以放弃，
然束缚却如初次相逢。
彷徨时代，
生活如此，
各自奔波劳累，
里梦成空终无所释怀，
他乡人，泪水雨，轮回首。

12:19 PM May 17 2010
mionfabian Brazil	Hey hi... I tryied to translation... But I failed... Why dont you do it for us understand better your poem??? Ps: I like to read this kind of texts... :)

12:19 PM May 17 2010

mionfabian
Brazil

Hey hi...

I tryied to translation... But I failed... Why dont you do it for us understand better your poem???

Ps: I like to read this kind of texts... :)

11:27 AM May 17 2010
imy133 Morocco	owww i really , want to know what the poem mean =) anyway good job ^^

11:27 AM May 17 2010

imy133
Morocco

owww i really , want to know what the poem mean =)

anyway good job ^^

10:27 AM May 17 2010
riad42 Austria	At least it looks nice to me ;-))) No translation? ;-))

10:27 AM May 17 2010

riad42
Austria

At least it looks nice to me ;-))) No translation? ;-))