here it is … BUT you should write a title FOR any essay .. i guess you can write " nothing is impossible " Two years ago, my grandmother was cured from a fatal disease. My family and I were very worried when we knew that my grandmother may live not longer than a week. But the doctor told us not to worry; they will try to do their best. Magically, my grandmother got over the disease so, thanks for the doctors' help with their patience and responsibility. Later, when my mother was in the hospital, there were always nurses beside her bed. Although we knew it was very difficult, all of my family as well as the doctors were patient to help her. The best doctors in the hospital were checked her health regularly every two hours. After six days, all the family seemed to be hopeless, but the doctor told us to not lose our hopes because nothing is impossible. The final diagnosis for her health got closer to each. They gave her the best medicines and used the most modern equipments because they want her to live longer. The seventh day seemed too long. That day went by and she was still alive. The next days, she was getting better and better, not only my family felt happy but also the doctors were too. We were told that although she got over the most dangerous time, she was too weak to do anything and she still needed some care. Till now, there are doctors checking her health every two hours and the nurse always beside her bed to support her whenever she coughed or felt unwell. Now, my grandmother can do many things such as, cooking, sewing, and washing up. I will never forget the doctor's words," It's my work. We will do anything as long as this thing we do can help the patients''. Now I realized that nothing is impossible if you do your best with patience and responsibility. ________ Some notices * if you meant (1 nurse) it's ok you can let it , if you meant many nurses you should say there were nurses. * it is ok to say " my family " but you repeated a lot so just want to change. * They gave her the best medicines, using the most modern equipments Gave past .. so use should be past too not only my family felt happy but also the doctors were too. Iam not sure from this sentence let any native speaker here check it. Doctors were tooOr just doctor were. some care OR YOU can write " someone to take care of her" it's up to you * the doctor's words OR what the doctor said. ** What do you mean by this sentence " I myself now realized that up to now" ?? ..................................................... Try to re-write it friend and i am quite sure that you will make it great =) Nothing is impossible .
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